This reflects quite a bit of serious introspection. It’s very layered and very genuine. I have this thing about writing . I want the reader to eventually lose sight of the fact that she is reading because she has sort of slipped into experiencing. Your writing has that quality, which makes sense. It reflects your thinking and, as I said, your thinking is like those age rings in the trunk of really old trees, each ring having grown out of the one before.
You caught me. I can’t recall if I said as much, but I am a cancer survivor. I slipped right into that perspective and lost the fidelity of the thread. Good catch.
You are wrong, by the way, random white chick on the interwebs. You putting your heart into it like this means more than you will ever know.
Take care.
~Catherine